Marketing people love acronyms and Mnemonics, and when it comes to writing effective marketing letters, the Mnemonic to remember is AIDPA Attention Interest Desire Proof Action:
Attention – Interest – Desire – Proof – Action
By following this model, you should be able to produce letters which will really get results. An explanation of each of these steps is outlined below:
Attention
The first step if the letter is to be effective, is to get the readers attention, and to encourage them to readyour message. It is generally accepted that you have the first line (at most) to get your readers attention. You should therefore look to highlight the purpose of the letter clearly in the first line. To this end it is best to present this as a “Headline” that can not be missed:
“A cost effective way to find new customers”
“Say goodbye to your ……… problems”
“A solution to ……”
“Lowest prices ever on …..”
There is only one purpose for this line, and that is to get the reader to read on, and not to throw the letter straight in the bin.
Interest
So you have the readers attention, and they are reading on. You now have to keep and develop their interest by telling them something more. This will normally be the first paragraph, and it should expand on the claim you made in the headline.
If we expand on the first example above “A cost effective way to find new customers”
The first paragraph might be.
“For most companies, finding new business is a priority. However in many cases, resources for achieving this are limited, so a highly cost effective solution is required. BSA marketing have 15 years experience in helping SMEs to generate new business on limited promotional budgets.”
If you have got it right, the reader is now interested in knowing what you have to offer, and you can move on to the next step.
Desire
Here you are presenting your offer, with the aim of generating a desire for that service in the mind of the reader.
Continuing the example above this section might read. “At BSA Marketing we focus on working with clients to identify companies who have the long termpotential to use their services, and then through carefully targeted direct marketing, to build arelationship with these contacts. In this way, it is possible to proactively identify opportunities as theyarise, and ensure that our clients are in “the right place at the right time” to capitalise on these opportunities.
Proof
So you have got your interest, and laid out your offering, but why should they believe your claims? The next step is therefore to back up your words with some proof of your capabilities. This could be a statistic, a testimonial quote from an existing customer etc. Continuing our example:
“As one existing client puts it, ‘Over the years we have worked with BSA, our customer base has constantly developed, without it costing the earth”.
Action
If things have gone to plan, the reader is now asking himself “where do I sign”. So the final step is to tell them how to get in touch . The key here is to make it as easy as possible, ideally via a faxback, or freephone/low call number, or via your website. The advantage of the latter is that you can also make further information available.
Concluding our example: “So telephone us today on 0845 050 1023, and find out how BSA Marketing can help you find morebusiness, you won’t be disappointed. Alternatively visit our website at www.bsamarketing.com andread more cases about how we have helped our clients”.
Following these steps, should maximise the number of recipients who will read the letter, and thus should maximise your response rate. Putting it all together, overleaf I have put the sections together to show how it might look as the completed letter.